The Rhythm of My Struggle

May 31, '06 2:56 AM
for everyone

greet to the breeze
tell about the faithful
greet to the wind
say about the honesty
send to the phoenix
the portrayal of my life
ask to the wave
sense of promise
debate to the edge of beach
meaning of firm and intact
whisper to the white sands
what the holiness is
hope this world appreciate this conscience
reveal to the howling water
what the power is
carry the melody to the big stones
about the violence and the obstinacy
sing to the color of earth
for this feeling has been sprouting
in this conscience...

for you...

Tags: spin words, spansih romance

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sikrit wrote on May 31, '06

Napee Vey bolak balik posting? salah mulu yaak...
tarik nafas duluuu makanya non :)
Dah blom? hehehe

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

yah ga jadi pertama deh ...
lagian ampe 2 gitu ...
=(

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

sikrit said

Napee Vey bolak balik posting? salah mulu yaak...
tarik nafas duluuu makanya non :)
Dah blom? hehehe

Itya..mba..jadi keposting dua kali neh..hadduh...=p
Tapi gapapa..silakan membaca...diving into ur heart

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

yah ga jadi pertama deh ...
lagian ampe 2 gitu ...
=(

Hehehe..maaf atuh a'...sok atuh ditunggu coment-nya...

brounie wrote on May 31, '06

ciieee....uhuyyy!!!

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

teh brouni.....kok ciee sih...coment-in donk..

thedreamland wrote on May 31, '06

wah puisinya rata kanan... he... he...

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

thedreamland said

wah puisinya rata kanan... he... he...

Hm..gak boleh ya teh...
cari suasana ah..

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

kaya lagunya ebiet g. ade
ku kabarkan semuanya ...
kepada awan, kepada ombak, kepada matahari
tetapi semua diam
tetapi semua bisu
tinggal aku sendiri
terpaku menatap langiiiiiiiiiittttttttttt ...

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

kaya lagunya ebiet g. ade
ku kabarkan semuanya ...
kepada awan, kepada ombak, kepada matahari
tetapi semua diam
tetapi semua bisu
tinggal aku sendiri
terpaku menatap langiiiiiiiiiittttttttttt ...

Hehehe...tema-nya mengambil sapaan pada alam a'
tapi beda attttuh....
ah...
But..gawatte banget tuh grammarnya..biarin ah...bodo ammetz namanya juga spin words...
HEhehe

brounie wrote on May 31, '06

hmmmm..nice poem..*tuh comment dari yang terdalam seorang brounie nih..*..=)

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

hmm..
speechless..

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

ariowicak said

hmm..
speechless..

Why..?!? Is it for my bad grammar..?!?!

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

brounie said

hmmmm..nice poem..*tuh comment dari yang terdalam seorang brounie nih..*..=)

Hehehe...kepaksa banget teh keliatanyaa...Hehehei

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

bukan..
karena bahasa inggrisku jelek.. :)

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

Tapi itu bener jujur dari ati Vera bang..untuk siapa aja...buat bang ario aja deh..(^^*)))

-silent-

kaburrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

orinkeren wrote on May 31, '06

Mh... berusaha menelaah. haduh, ternyata bahasa inggris gue jelek banget. tapi bagus kok... penuh perasaan. lagi bluee banget deh kayaknya.

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

lagi kenapa vera..??

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verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

Tapi itu bener jujur dari ati Vera bang..untuk siapa aja...buat bang ario aja deh..(^^*)))

-silent-

kaburrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Addduh...aa' ni gimanaaa sssiiiih....???????????????????
Hiks..hiks....hiks...Pssstttttttttttttttt
Tak cubit tak pukulin...beneran deh nie orang.....
Kyyyaaaaaaagghhhh

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

orinkeren said

Mh... berusaha menelaah. haduh, ternyata bahasa inggris gue jelek banget. tapi bagus kok... penuh perasaan. lagi bluee banget deh kayaknya.

Hh..iya teh orin..
i'm in blue...
prasaan aku translatenya gak pake kata2 yang susah kok.
tuing..tuing...aku yang aneh yaa..

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

ariowicak said

lagi kenapa vera..??

Gak kenapa2 mas...=)

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

Gak kenapa2 mas...=)

abis bang kok mas ...
besok uda donkz ...
hehehehehehe

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

abis bang kok mas ...
besok uda donkz ...
hehehehehehe

Pppsst....aa sayang...masa gak boleh..?!?!
Hum....

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

to : ariowicak
no hard feeling ya, bro ...
just kiddin' kok ...
seneng aj godain ad' gw yg nakal ini ...
hahahahahaahaha

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

makasih ya a' :)

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

Kok kayaknya gue ketinggalan ya ama blog loe?? Nice poem..just like others ur always lost ur grammar way..try to upgrade it dear.i know it's one of ur spin words, but don't ever kill the grammar form ur mind! Artinya Loe kagak bisa idup tanpa gremer vey,
fuck banget tau gak seh vey...ym gue kok rusak...napa kagak bisa dibuka...gue juga gak bisa buka email2 gue fuck bangett. And ne load-nya juga lama banget!! Gilaaa kayak nunggu kakek-kakek yang nyebrang zebra cross tauk gak?? Cuman gue gak mau ketinggalan blog2 loe lagi..toch, kurang apa lagi coba? LOL LOL
Hm..bener ya..upgrade ur grammar dear.

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winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

wow! ada master of english neh ... mau dunx belajar, funny... hehehehehe ...
welcome-welcome ... gpp kok telat, ga disuruh pulang kaya vey.

mybloodybike wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

greet to the breeze

ciamik... baris pertama mengingatkan saya pada salah satu judul lagu dari slowdive, catch the breeze..

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funnye wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

wow! ada master of english neh ... mau dunx belajar, funny... hehehehehe ...
welcome-welcome ... gpp kok telat, ga disuruh pulang kaya vey.

hhhh..gag juga..cuman gue coment ja si vey rada-rada lieur ma grammar..ya gue seh sbage spupu bantu die, suka nangis2 getoh...lol

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

ihh..Nie sayaang makasih...katanya net kamu gie ngerror gapapa ngelatih kesabaran kamu non, nunggu kake2 nyebrang kan kesabaran apalagi klo dibantu ma kamu pasti pahala...hehkehekhe
...trus napa lagi tuh ym-nya?!?!? Duh bukan gara2 aku kan...?!? Hihi ya udah sabar...gak chatting ma dimas skali2 gak kan jadi mati kan..?!?! Hehehe

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

mybloodybike said

ciamik... baris pertama mengingatkan saya pada salah satu judul lagu dari slowdive, catch the breeze

Deep Thanks ya...

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

...trus napa lagi tuh ym-nya?!?!? Duh bukan gara2 aku kan...?!? Hihi ya udah sabar...gak chatting ma dimas skali2 gak kan jadi mati kan..?!?! Hehehe

iya kan bisa chat sama gue ... wkwkwkwkwkwkwkw ...
Funny, seneng olah raga juga kan ... seneng bola ngga ?
nanti conference sms kapan" ... =P

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

for this feeling has been sprouting
in this conscience...

Wow...deep lasting for this spin words dear..
hm..let me dive..
i know the one whom u give for...

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

iya kan bisa chat sama gue ... wkwkwkwkwkwkwkw ...
Funny, seneng olah raga juga kan ... seneng bola ngga ?
nanti conference sms kapan" ... =P

Gue sukak juga bola..gue suka milan! Hm..bole-bole juga toch, but gue kyknya harus minta izin si dooi..maklum dia jelesan bange
He..he..he...okeh ditunggu y

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

asik2..
ada milanisti juga.. :D

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

yang punya rumah balik neh?
vey kemana seh..gue mo chat ma loe..kok diasappear geto seh

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06, edited on May 31, '06

funnye said

Gue sukak juga bola..gue suka milan! Hm..bole-bole juga toch, but gue kyknya harus minta izin si dooi..maklum dia jelesan bange
He..he..he...okeh ditunggu y

wah---wah , beda aliran deh ...
daripada perdebatan panjang,
lebih baik kita conference yg lain aja nantinya ...
F-1 aja ... heheheheehheehe

jealous-an ya? tenang aja ... gue ngga gigit koq *apa hubungannya coba* ...

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

sorry ...tadi solat dulu....

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

wah---wah , beda aliran deh ...
daripada perdebatan panjang,
lebih baik kita conference yg lain aja nantinya ...
F-1 aja ... heheheheehheehe

Iya F1 aja...gue suka raikkonen abis n gue tuh sering debat banget ma si vey yang keukeuh pisan ke schumi..udah tuwa pula...herran
cuman gue kesel ma mclaren sekarang...drivernya pada bagus2 gitu(unless JPM) malah lagi bobrok konstruksinya..katanbya mereka gi nyiapin buat 2007!!! Bull shit bangee yaa taun 2005 banyak kesalahn gitu bilang buat 2006 tauknyaa???? Haaa..nonsense bangeee
But..gue tetep dukung raikkonen..?
Loe suka pa?

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

Wow...deep lasting for this spin words dear..
hm..let me dive..
i know the one whom u give for.

better for you to keep ur mouth ok?
*hihi*
But thanks lot nie, kapan2 kamu bikin puisi ya..jangan bilyard mulu maenannyaaa
skali2 curahin isi hati kamu ...hm..nikmat banget nie..

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

But..gue tetep dukung raikkonen..?
Loe suka pa?

Vey, Tell her ...
tell her that I love mcLaren too ...
tell her that I like Kimi , not JPM ...
I hope button replace him soon ...

Kok jodoh ya? heuhehehehehe ...
asik-asik dapet pendukung mcLaren ...
uhuy!

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

wah...
kalo di F1..
yang keren itu adrian newey...
perancang mobil F1... :D

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

ariowicak said

asik2..
ada milanisti juga.. :D

Loe juga suka?? Wah aya babaturan yeuh..
Heh vey denger tuh si aryo juga sukak...makan tuoch vey MU-nya loe..
LOL...canda sayang....toss dulu

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

He..he..he...okeh ditunggu y

Duh..inget dimas nie...inget...

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

makan tuoch vey MU-nya loe..

uppss ... jng singgung" bola ne ... ntar akan terjadi perdebatan panjang ... huehuehueuhehuehe *anything ok, except MILAN*

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

iya..iya..Nie...
yang namnya windu
he loves mclarren
loves kimi not jpm too..
and he loves juve so much...
cucok toch...
*ketauan si dimas hayyah...bisa babak belur dia..*

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

*ketauan si dimas hayyah...bisa babak belur dia..*

tenang aja mainnya bersih kok ...
skenario harus sempurna
*halah* ...
piss ...

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

funnye said

makan tuoch vey MU-nya loe.

Sayaaang..kamu tau kan kenapa kau suka MU?? Nah, maklum donk...aku punya privasi and kmu juga..
and kamu tau aku gak pernah ganggu privasi kamu ok??
so jalan di jalan masing2

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

kok malah jadi berantem gini..??

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

Nah, maklum donk...aku punya privasi and kmu juga..
and kamu tau aku gak pernah ganggu privasi kamu ok??
so jalan di jalan masing2

Akurrrrr ....
*Toss*
Pilihanmu ... pilihanmu
Pilihanku ... pilihanku

funnye wrote on May 31, '06

ariowicak said

wah...
kalo di F1..
yang keren itu adrian newey...
perancang mobil F1... :D

ha dodol!! loe juga suka f1? Ha...toss dulu

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

ariowicak said

kok malah jadi berantem gini..??

bukan berantem mas ario, ini hanya sedikit penegasan biar tidak akan terjadi hal-hal yg diinginkan ... hehehehehe ...

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

VEY PUSSING.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
INI KAN NGEBAHAS PUISI....
KOK MALAH JADI KE BOLA...F1....YANG LAEN2 PULA SIH...?!??!?!
DUH................

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

aku juga jadi pusing..

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

ariowicak said

kok malah jadi berantem gini..??

gak tau nih mas...

winduradityo wrote on May 31, '06

-udah ah no comment deh-
ada yg marah" ... case closed
funny ... kalo dah OL ym-nya kita lanjut di YM aja ya ...
sorry buat tuan rumahnya ...

-bye-

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradityo said

-udah ah no comment deh-
ada yg marah" ... case closed
funny ... kalo dah OL ym-nya kita lanjut di YM aja ya ...
sorry buat tuan rumahnya ...

-bye

aa' sayng....aku gak marah...
cuman kok jadi begini yach..
critanyaa ku lagi mellow nih.,
but...
THANKS ALL YANG UDAH RAMEIN BLOG NYA VEY....
LOVE YOU...
MUAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCH

ariowicak wrote on May 31, '06

knp lagi mellow..??

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

gak kenapa2 kok...
mungkin bagi yang diving ini puisi bisa ngerti kenapa aku mellow...
heheh...just ask to this world

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

winduradtyo dan funnye...has just leave this blog..
hehehe....para maniak2 bola f1...

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

Dont want to close my eyes
I dont want to fall asleep
Cause Id miss you baby
And I dont want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
Id still miss you baby
And I dont want to miss a thing

Dont want to close my eyes
I dont want to fall asleep
I dont want to miss a thing

wib711 wrote on May 31, '06

For Me.... Thanks a lot Vey.....

menhariq wrote on May 31, '06

puisi buatku mana? huhu.. :p

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

menhariq said

puisi buatku mana? huhu.. :p

Bang Eyiq....smangat donk...i know u got a bad day today....but...tetep smangat ya...
Hm...aQ bikinin pasti buat eyiq..
HIhihi...tunggu aja...my lovely bro..

verafun wrote on May 31, '06

wib711 said

For Me.... Thanks a lot Vey.....

Kya..hehehe...iya deh...buat mas wib...yang gi capek2 dsana..

wib711 wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

Kya..hehehe...iya deh...buat mas wib...yang gi capek2 dsana..

yah.... terpaksa gitu.. ga usah deh Vey... hehehehe

imansoe wrote on May 31, '06

verafun said

critanyaa ku lagi mellow

ih ih ih.... vey lg mellow ma sapa niy....

bintang-bintang itu bersinar lebih terang malam ini
mengantar mimpi yg mendesah menyelinap
merabahkan diri pada lembutnya hati yang mengawang lembut

verafun wrote on Jun 1, '06

wib711 said

yah.... terpaksa gitu.. ga usah deh Vey... hehehehe

Waiiyyaah...gak kepaksa atuh a' Hehehe.....met bertugas yaaa...

verafun wrote on Jun 1, '06

imansoe said

ih ih ih.... vey lg mellow ma sapa niy....

bintang-bintang itu bersinar lebih terang malam ini
mengantar mimpi yg mendesah menyelinap
merabahkan diri pada lembutnya hati yang mengawang lembut

Hm...ada dech...
Hihihih...
Nice tuh mas poem-nya..
buat vey ya..?!? Makacciiih....

verafun wrote on Jun 1, '06

idiotsupreme wrote on Jun 6, '06

verafun said

carry the melody to the big stones
about the violence and the obstinacy
sing to the color of earth
for this feeling has been sprouting
in this conscience...

I find these line sorta appealing, curiously quaint

verafun wrote on Jun 8, '06

thanks...

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