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'puisimu gersang', ucap sang lilin

Nov 20, '06 4:15 AM
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teriak lilin yang berbinar

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kembali berteriak

--puisipuisimu begitu gersang ver..

--biar mati membuncah

--menenggelamkan katakatamu

--pada hasratmu

--airmata tak cukup memberi kelembapan pada setiap untai katamu

--tutup saja bukumu

--buang saja penamu

--tak perlu bermain dengan katakata

terlalu beraninya dirimu menyinggungku wahai lilin

lalu

kutiup lilin itu biar padam

mati

vera_rachma_1989

20 oct 2006

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gharonk wrote on Nov 20, '06

mulai mehe mehe yah..

ayunamaku wrote on Nov 20, '06

bagus ni puisinya

verafun wrote on Nov 20, '06

gharonk said

mulai mehe mehe yah..

tau nih...
baca deh the latest my journal..
v yang lagi mellow mode

verafun wrote on Nov 20, '06

ayunamaku said

bagus ni puisinya

thanks dear...
dah mau baca and mau koment.:)

menhariq wrote on Nov 20, '06

Senja hari telah tiba, adikku.
Saatnya menarik pena bulu angsa
Dan goreskan mentari jingga
Di atas kertas putih puisimu..

ethnicgirl wrote on Nov 20, '06

verafun said

--puisipuisimu begitu gersang ver

'lin...kalau begitu.... tolong buatkan aku puisi yang tak gersang...!!' ucap snag Fani ..... =D

LOL....

nice poem sis.... =))

16j42 wrote on Nov 20, '06

"puisi mu gersang" apa benar yang dikau bilang
kali pun benar bahkan bagai batang ranting kerontang
kan ku susun rancang bagi komposisi intuisi
puisi memaknai puisi kuntum bunga musim semi

(kohar)

hyd3ki wrote on Nov 21, '06

maaf klo puisiku gersang sehingga tak mampu menghangatkan hatimu, tp jgn kau tiup aku =P

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